Layouts are so important! I wish I knew how to perfect them! With this page, it took me until I got to coloring this earlier in the week, before I realized the layout was boring. So the above is what I did differently. Below is how is looked before. I can’t claim that I rocked it beyond all objectivity, but *I* certainly like the above version better.

Also, it occurred to me, during the reworking, that I could hold off on the last panel’s reveal until the next page, since I was going for a more exciting storytelling approach, hence the “SPOILERS!!” tag in the above original page. Notice, too, I punched up the dialogue. I’m pretty much constantly doing that.

ALSO also, enjoy the appearance of Sara’s husband!